Tight writing this round. Nice work! No telling where the story's about to go.
I noticed back in The Veldt and again in Stheno that you seem to enjoy using fragments to extend a description. Less commas and more periods. What started such a penchant?
Tight writing this round. Nice work! No telling where the story's about to go.
I noticed back in The Veldt and again in Stheno that you seem to enjoy using fragments to extend a description. Less commas and more periods. What started such a penchant?
Thanks!
As for the fragments- I picked it up from Cormac McCarthy and Peter Heller, in The Road and The Dog Stars, respectively. My two favorite books.
Thank you very much, Lily!