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Charlie V's avatar

I completely disagree that you failed to properly convey Hedgepth’s monologue to try justify himself. It was the best part for me

Odd Old News's avatar

I’ve meet a few Hedgepeths in my day. You capture the personality of that character perfectly I thought.

❄️ Sean Dreamer ❄️'s avatar

Thanks, Odd! They do seem to be rather unfortunately common in this world, alas.